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HILARIOUS AND RANDOM! I like it. One thing... Turns out, he could stand the force of a piano being dropped on him. What a weakling. I think you mean "couldn't"...

I like it! One thing... Wouldn't she be all dead and rotten if it was around Christmas and she said November 19? So do you mean December 19???

I like it, it's very strong. You express you emotions well. :D

It's interesting. It's kind of random though, a little hard to understand. For some reason, I liked the paper coffins line. :D

WOW! This was excellent, one of the best I have read on here so far :D I think you might want to change "distractor" to "distraction".

Coolie. You may want to reconsider There once was a princess named Besses, Who had the most glorious tresses. Because the second line is off a little and they don't ...

I like it, but there is no rhythm! You don't have to make it like EXACTLY the same, just a little more... Together.

I agree with Snoink. You should probably stick to your message. There a few place where there unnessicary periods and no capitalizzation, but, it's poerty, so it could be purposeful. ...

I like the sentence flow. But you could be a little more direct.

LOL Nice :D I like the ending very much :D

First of all, I'm not saying Literature bores me. I'm saying IF I get bored again, which is unlikely. That's twisting my words. And, I am Nikki. I was speaking ...